Page 7

 

Panel 1

Medium long shot of Vretria standing naked in the ally holding Jake up against the wall

 

Vretria

No talking?  Perhaps just tear out your vocal cords then?

 

Panel 2

Close up of Vretria hand on Jake’s neck.  Her fingernails digging into the flesh leaving creating long trail of blood.

 

Panel 3

Close up of Jake’s hand with the blue ring on it clenched into a fist.  The ring is shining brightly.

 

Panel 4

Jake swings a round house punch catching Vretria on the chin.  A thin stream of blood follows the path of the ring form where it contacted Vretria’s chin.

 

Panel 5

Vretria crumples on the ground in front of Jake.  A thin gash on her face is bleeding. Vretria touches the gash on her face and she looks suprized.

 

Vretria

What’s this?

Page 8

 

Panel 1

Vretria is still on the ground in front of Jake examining the blood coming from her cheek in shock.  Jake is pushing himself up and at the same time grabbing his gun off the ground

 

Narration

I don’t understand how but I got the advantage back.

 

Panel 2

Jake stands over the Vretria holding the hand with the ring in front of her face.  The hand holding the gun hangs loosely at his side.

 

Narration

But it’s time to play this new card.

 

Jake

Ok, sister, time for you to answer my questions.  I don’t want to hurt that pretty face of yours but I…

 

Panel 3

Close up of Vretria’s face as she starts to sing again.

 

Vretria (Spooky other-worldly text signifying celestial music)

Ah Ahhhhhhhh

 

Panel 4

The ring on Jake’s hand shatters under the force of Vretria’s voice.

 

Panel 5

Jake is throw in the air by the force of the voice

 

Narration

That didn’t work.